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雅思大作文常考题型有观点类、讨论类、问题解决类、利弊类。观点类表明对给定观点的态度题目：我们应该只关心自己的国家么 We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?同意左半句，否定右半句。应该帮助社区的人，也应该帮助世界的人转述题目Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society.个人立场 I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.中心句(部分同意)On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. 解 释 背 景 In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way.泛例It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people.具体例子In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen.总结结果As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.中心句(部分同意)At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders.解释背景+对比In some countries the problems that people faceare much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. 具体例子For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries,governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist.总结结果A small donation to an international charity might have a muchgreater impact than helping in our local area.重申立场+总结观点In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.讨论类分析两种观点并给出个人看法题目：博物馆的目的应该是娱乐还是教育 Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give you own opinion.转述题目People have different views about the role and function of museums.个人中立的立场 In my opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.中心句On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain.解释原 因 Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will want to see.反例+对比The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning.扩展结果This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactiveactivities or even games as part of its exhibitions.中心句On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education.背景 The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know.扩展结果Usually this means that the history behind the museum’ s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways.具体例子Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. 扩 展 结 果 In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.重申立场+个人观点In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.问题解决类剖析问题成因并提解决方案题目：平均寿命变长的原因和办法 In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.转述题目It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.回应问题一Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend,回应问题二societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.中心句(背景)As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. 问 题 一 The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension.扩展结果 The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population.解释转述In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults.问题一Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.中 心 句 There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above.措施一Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70.泛例Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. 措 施 二 A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adultswho pay taxes.措施二Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.重申立场In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.利弊类分析现象或行为的优缺点并权衡 题目：现在人们更喜欢独居了是好还是坏In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?转述题目+限定范围In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.个人立场In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.(不推荐双边，官范是一边倒)中心句有两方面的好处The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.好处一On an individual level, people who choose tolive alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.具体例子A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean,pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; 扩展结果an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.好处二From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing.扩展结果This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.中心句过渡引出坏处However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.坏处一Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; 扩展结果in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.坏处二Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.扩展结果While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.重 申 立场 + 总 结 观点 In conclusion, the increase in one-person household无论你是雅思小白，还是已经历过雅思考试，渴望突破雅思写作瓶颈，雅思考官Simon的写作9分范文合集都将是你不可或缺的备考利器。PDF已备好，快和小星一起打卡学习！?PDF部分预览

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