雅思大作文7分范文及解析：成功好的方式是上大学

双边类大作文，教育类话题

Some people argue that the best way to have a successful life is to attend college, but other people do not think so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目大意

一些人认为……，但是其他人不这么认为。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。但是本题较为特殊，观点2只是表达不同意观点1的观点，并没有增加额外的信息，其本质上为单观点议论文。

再仔细审题，观点1本质上为“策略评价类”，即为了达到成功人生这一目的，上大学这一策略是否是“好的”，即best为逻辑基点。那一般我们看到有词的观点，都是可以持“反对”角度切入的。

然后我们来一起看，为什么想要获得成功，读大学不是好的方式。主要是两方面。

首先，成功的本身定义是模糊的，有的人认为家庭圆满是成功，而有的人认为事业顺利是成功。不同定义的成功所需要当事人具备的要素也是不同的。除了专业技能外，还需要诸多品质，比如诚实善良、或是对感情忠贞不渝等等，而很多品质并不是读大学所能教授的，可能需要通过良好的家庭教育等才能获得。

其次，哪怕就事业成功之类范围下，单就读大学而言不一定能促使成功。一是大学教育的普及，导致大学生变多不再具有稀缺属性，读大学无法在成为一种相较于他人而言的优势。其次大学教育并不适用于所有人，要考进大学往往需要学生足够好的考试*才可以。而对于学业*不好的学生来说，通过职业技术培训学习专业技能，或者未来持续的自主学习，同样有机会能够获得事业成功。

高分范文示例

In spite of the fact that the world is undergoing various changes in recent years, what are the key factors to achieve success still remains one of the most heatedly discussed issues. There are some people who argue that attending college is the best way to succeed, while others hold the opposite opinion. Personally, I prefer the latter.

The first reason why I cannot regard this as the best method lies in the fact that acquiring college qualification alone can no longer be a superiority when facing the fierce competition today. In other words, with the approach of knowledge society, some regions in the world have gradually achieved the popularization of higher education, and even in some developed countries, the number of graduate and doctoral students is also soaring, so only having received undergraduate education is no longer preferred by the company in the workplace. Besides, with social advances, the factors that promote success, such as better social relationships, family background, and personal appearance, have become more diversified, by which I mean without any conditions mentioned above, the probability of success is extremely slight even if one has graduated from the college.

In addition, there do exist better factors to achieve success. More specifically, the elements of a person's success can be divided into congenital conditions and acquired efforts. If a person is born with advantages in appearance, intelligence and wealth, making good use of these innate advantages can facilitate him or her to achieve success at a very young age, just like many young stars in China at present. However, for most ordinary people who do not obtain these inherited advantages, hard-working persistence, and determination are very important qualities. In other words, due to poverty or other reasons, even if someone give up university education, and choose to be engaged in vocational work, as long as they persist in honing their own skills and insisting on innovation, they can also achieve achievements in their own fields.

Admittedly,although the definition of success is quite different for each individual, the fundamentals for achieving a goal will forever remain the same. As mentioned above, university education has been popularized in many countries, that is to say, this has become one of the most basic conditions in current competition. However, if one wants to have an advantage over others in knowledge, people should not only meet the requirements of undergraduate education, but also adhere to lifelong learning.

In conclusion, it seems to me that attending college is not the best way to achieve success mainly because there are other elements and methods to succeed.