雅思大作文7分范文及解析：年轻人假期不去户外运动

报告类大作文，健康类话题

Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environment. Why? And how to encourage them to go out?

题目来源：2021年4月17日大陆雅思大作文

题目大意：年轻人不再在假期热衷于户外活动（如徒步旅行和登山）。原因是什么？有什么办法鼓励年轻人多参加户外活动？

思路解析：这是一道报告类大作文，报告类的结构很简单，问什么答什么就可以，2个主体段分别回应2个部分，主体段-1分析原因；主体段-2分析办法。

再来看题目，这道题目需要注意关键词：Young people，do not spend their holiday and weekend，outdoor activities，我们在分析原因和办法时要注意结合这几个关键词，并且要解释通这些点之间的逻辑关系。

下面我们就一起来看下，年轻人不再在假期热衷于户外运动的原因和解决办法分别有什么。年轻人不再进行户外运动根本上有三方面原因：没有时间、不愿意去户外运动以及有更好的替代选择（或运动）。先来看没有时间，年轻人因为学习或是工作任务繁重，学生在节假日需要补课和完成作业，上班族需要在节假日加班工作，导致年轻人并没有时间出去做户外运动。其次，未开发过的自然环境意味着有一定危险或是配套设施不足，无法吸引到年轻人。而成熟的自然景点，诸如黄山等，在假期又有大量的游客，导致年轻人并不想去凑热闹。再有，去自然环境户外运动意味着要花费许多时间在路上以及花费体力进行运动。因此，相比较而言，许多年轻人觉得窝在家里打游戏、刷抖音或睡觉更加舒服和快乐而不愿意去户外运动。而那些愿意运动的年轻人，也可能不愿意花时间在路上或是觉得在大自然不方便，所以选择了室内运动替代。

再来看解决办法，可以有三个措施。

一是政府和学校或是企业应该保证年轻人有足够的假期时间去从事户外运动，或是能够统一组织学生和员工进行户外运动。二是通过媒体、公益广告等手段，宣传户外运动有益于健康，或是推出奖励措施，引导年轻人更多进行户外运动。三是能够开发更多更好的自然景点，建立完善的配套设施和交通，通过宣传和活动，吸引年轻人前往进行徒步旅行或是爬山等户外运动。

高分范文示例：

In many countries, there is an impending trend that life in the great outdoors is no longer a popular leisure choice among younger generations. While everyone has disparate reasons behind the transformation of their leisure preference, I will attribute this phenomenon mainly to two aspects of modern life. Also, I would give some suggestions to revive the active lifestyle.     

I will firstly see the fading away of outdoor activities among the youth as a symptom of troubles to which the fast-paced life in modern society as the answer. Given the ubiquitous competition in modern society, younger generations today are inundated with various tasks from teachers or employers, which inevitably deprive their leisure time. To complicate matters further worse, even when given a holiday, many opt to venerate virtual communities over outdoor activities such as hiking or camping, providing the fact that this generation has been weaned on digialized entertainment, whether it be social media, computer games or live streaming. 

While the youth’s alienation from the nature environment has been frowned upon in modern society, I will say there are still something we can to do to bring back to the active lifestyle. One suggestion is to launch campaigns to create awareness about the relevance of outdoor leisure life to public health – such an approach can evoke youths’ consciousness of a less sedentary lifestyle. But only the cultivation of awareness is not enough, what would effectuate the revival of life in the outdoors is the support from schools or companies – they ought to organize more events in the great nature for students and employees as a break, rather than chaining them to computer desks with work overload. 

From what has been discussed above, it is my conclusion therefore, people’s reluctance to relax outdoors is the result of their lack of free time and fascination with digitalized entertainment. In response to this, media campaigns on health leisure activities and supportive measures from organizations are needed to revive outdoor activities among younger generations. 

相关词汇和语法结构：

Impending 即将发生的，逼近的   

Revive 复兴  

Ubiquitous 无处不在的 

Deprive 剥夺  

be weaned on 受影响  

Relevance 重要性，关联 

Reluctance 勉强，不情愿