大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：专业人士应该收入更高

观点类大作文，社会类话题

Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?  

题目大意：

有人说专业人才如医生，护士和老师对社会贡献更大，所以应该比体育和娱乐业工作者获得更多报酬。同意反对？ 

思路解析：

这是一道观点类大作文，聊的是专业人士是否应该比体育和娱乐业工作者获得更高的报酬。审题时候要注意观点给出的前提（greater contributions）和因果逻辑（should be），即因为“专业人士对社会贡献更多”所以“他们应该挣得更多”，我们可以分别从前提是否准确和因果逻辑的漏洞来给出反驳。下面，就和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看对社会贡献的问题。可以承认的是，题目列举的专业人士对于社会贡献确实很大，医生和护士会救死扶伤、照顾病患，老师教书育人为社会培养人才。但是，greater contributions是一个抽象模糊的概念，什么样算贡献观点里并没有说明。运动员赢得世界冠军给国家带来荣，导演拍摄的电影传播了传统文化，各类节目和影视作品丰富了大家业余生活和精神世界等等这些算不算一种贡献，在没有明确标准的情况下，就认为前者比后者贡献更大是不合理的。

然后来看收入问题，观点认为收入多少应该和对社会贡献直接挂钩，但这个逻辑是不合理的，因为收入是要根据多方面来考量的。除了社会贡献，还有商业价值等因素。体育和娱乐明星本身能获得巨大的流量关注，这些流量对于商家来说有着很大的广告价值，因此商家会找明星进行广告代言并给出相应的报酬。因此，评判收入高低需要从多方面考量，而不仅仅看社会贡献。

范文示例：

There is a conviction that professionals (e.g. doctors, nurses and teachers) should be given higher priority over practitioners in other less important fields, such as sports and entertainment industry. However, such a view looks simplistic to me to associate salaries solely with the social value of a specific job.    

There are reasons to why some people tend to say that professionals in medical and educational field should earn higher salaries than athletes or actors. Indeed, medical workers do play a key role in saving people’s lives. One convincing example can be seen in the recent pandemic of Covid 19: had it not been for their struggle, millions of more patients would have lost their lives; so are teachers, whose proficiency is indispensable for the cultivation of future educated talents needed by various industries. On the contrary, athletes and actors do not have much of a role to play in these aspects. 

Even professional workers play a more practical role than those dealing with sports or entertainment, it doesn’t necessarily lead to higher payment of the former. Those championing the assumption in question are oblivious to the irrelevant connection between the social implications of occupations and salaries – in the real business world, how much workers deserve doesn’t exclusively hinge on their relevance to society; rather, workers’ salaries depend more on the revenue they generated for employers. In this respect, I would say that those celebrities on sports fields or on stages may deserve better economic return, subject to their business value in terms of advertising.

From what has been discussed, it is my conclusion therefore, it is unreasonable to associate workers’ salaries with their social significance, while the discussion should also take into account their business value.  

相关词汇和语法结构：

professional 专业人员  

practitioner 从业者

pandemic 疫情

cultivation 培养