剑8写作7分范文及解析 | Test1 父母和学校教育孩子成

双边类大作文，教育类话题

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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题目大意

有些人认为父母应该教孩子如何成为一个好的社会公民。然而其他人认为学校是学习这一点的地方。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，讨论的是父母和学校教育孩子的责任，双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，结论就是自己的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时需要注意两点，一是分别说清楚“父母”和“学校”两个讨论主体的作用，二是在论证过程中可以明确“good members of society”的定义。下面，就和大家一起来看下具体观点。

家长作为孩子的监护人，本身有责任和义务抚养自己孩子，让他们未来能够融入社会，成为一个遵纪守法的公民。同时，作为孩子头一个“老师”，也是陪伴孩子较多的人，父母常常会成为孩子的榜样。他们的思想和言行举动都会被孩子模仿和学习，他们的陪伴能让孩子感受到家庭的温暖和安全感，一个好的家庭成长环境不仅有利于孩子的心理健康发展，会对他们未来的行为模式产生重要的影响。

学校作为孩子在成长过程中待的时间较多的地方之一，同样需要担起教育孩子的责任，主要有三方面。

一是学校和老师需要教授孩子各种知识和技能，这些内容直接决定了孩子长大后能否找到一份好工作或有能力为社会发展做出积极贡献。

二是学校和老师同样也会影响孩子的价值观，他们和父母一样，能够告诉孩子应该做什么并且避免孩子遭受欺负等负面行为的影响。

三是学校是孩子们头一个接触社交的场合，他们在这里能够学会如何处理人际关系、如何解决矛盾以及和他人组队一起完成目标。这些都是未来踏入社会后所必须掌握的社交能力。

其中头一点和第三点都是在家里父母很难传授给孩子的。

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范文示例

While education has long been recognized as paramount for children’s development, the problem of who should be responsible for the future of children has never reached an agreement. Whereas some consider it as parents’ obligation, others stick to the opinion that schools should have their role to play in cultivating children to be a good social member. Personally speaking, I tend to support the latter point of view, considering the advantages of schools in the cultivation of academic knowledge and social skills.   

It is easy for some people to laud parents’ value in educating children to be a good social member, though it works with enlightening education in childhood. While at early age, young children are more likely to establish these values from the role modelling from adults, that’s why parenting can play its part. Given that parents are the first educator for the next generation, the way they think, speak and behavior does exert long term influence on their offspring, particularly in the cultivation of conscience, personality and outlook on the society. All of these features will accompany children for the rest of their life, regulating their behavior.  

However, this is not how it seems in the eyes of others, who attribute children’s development to schooling. Compared with parenting, the first advantage of the school lays emphasis on academic education, which is inextricably bound up with the future career of students. After all, it is not social etiquette but academic achievements that decide which university students could go. 

Apart from that, another factor exclusive to school is the social ability. Since the first day they step into campus, students are exposed to a wide variety of peers and teachers from various backgrounds. Such an environment will provide opportunities for them to learn communication skills and deal with different problems in interpersonal contact. All of these capabilities are imperative to be a good member of adult society and cannot be acquired by solely communicating with parents. 

Although parenting has its part to play in children’s education, I would argue that the school should be more important for the them to be a useful talent in society, because it provides students with a more comprehensive capability than parents do.

相关词汇和语法结构

Paramount 至高无上的，首要的

obligation 义务，责任

cultivation 耕种，种植

academic 学术的

enlightening education 启蒙教育

role modelling 角色扮演

offspring 孩子，子女，后代

conscience 良心，良知

emphasis 强调

social etiquette 社交礼仪

imperative 重要紧急的

comprehensive 综合的