大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：城市划分区域的利弊

利弊类大作文，城市规划类话题

In many cities, planners have located shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages for city residents?

题目大意

在许多城市，规划者将商店、学校、办公室和住宅安置在彼此相隔甚远的特定区域。这项政策对城市居民来说利弊如何？

思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文，讨论的城市不同功能区规划的问题。有些同学可能没理解什么叫“商店、学校、办公室和住宅安置在不同区域”，大家在国内居住一般出了小区就能看到各种商店、学校，这种就是混合布局。而分割区域可以简单理解为将一个城市比作“田”字，4个口的区域分别安置了商店、学校、办公楼和住宅。

此外还有一点需要说明，这道题在回忆上除了我们上面给出的题目，还出现了另一个版本是“In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?”，两个版本的区别在于最后的限定词“for city residents”，下面，就和大家来看下具体利弊分析。

首先来看好处，有三方面。

一是对于管理者来说，这样的城市布局更加简单和便于管理，在不同区域都可以制定针对性的管理措施和建设专门的配套措施。比如商业区只需要制定商业相关的管理条例，而不用顾忌这些条例是否会影响的普通居民；不同区域的能源消耗也更加明确，电力、水务等部门可以有针对性的提前做好能源规划和输送。

二是明确的区域划分有助于配套服务，比如货运司机可以一次性给同区域内多家商店运输货品，相较于要跑遍整个城市才能送完货物，前者无疑更加好。并且，居民在休息时也不用担心有货车带来的噪音污染和交通安全问题。

三是对于居民来说，明确的区域划分记起来更加容易，大家有需要时能很明确自己要去哪里。在购买商品和服务时，也更加容易进行比较和挑选。

但是这样给居民带来的问题也很多，主要有两方面。

一是居民需要花费更多时间和精力在日常购物上，如果一个人想在休息之余买个零食和咖啡，他们不得不从一个办公区或学校区域花很多时间跑到另一个区域购买然后再返回，这远没有出门就能买到来得方便。同时，为了避免反复去商场，居民会尽可能一次购物中买更多的东西，这意味着他们要花费更多力气来运输以及更大的空间来储存购买的东西。

二是居民可能会遇到严重的交通不便，集中区域往往会带来特定时间段交通拥堵的问题。比如早晚高峰，居民都会集中在居住区和办公区往返，很容易造成交通拥堵。而对于那些人口极多的大城市而言，住在边缘区域的居民想前往另一个区域，也需要耗费大量的时间在路程上。

范文示例

Different conceptions are introduced by planners to make arrangements for the urban area; some may consider separating functional areas like shops, offices, and residential complexes from each other. However, no one knows for sure how this works in the long run, and what would be the future of this development. 

Whether this type of distribution of areas within a city is advantageous or not depends on a set of factors lying behind, among which the technology, transport, and logistic system play a part. What we can imagine from the outset of a city divided into different functional areas is its inconvenience, since the simplification in any individual part means people may have to travel from place to place to fulfill their diverse requirements. One would be forced to drive long distances away from their offices for just one coffee, or to purchase a batch of goods stuffed in their trunks whenever they had a chance to go to a department store away from their home. However, the scenario mentioned would be theoretically altered by solutions like online ordering, through which the purchasing may be realized over the internet, and there would be couriers out there providing delivery services on food and other commodities. 

The reasoning listed above may have yet to address some other questions, like how to make the online system friendly enough for groups like the elderly. The truth, however, is that there is an alternative possibility where we consider residents' living convenience from another perspective. To integrate facilities with the same function means that users would be clear about their destinations, knowing where they would go if they need to, say, buy things that may otherwise be hard to find in a city dotted with stores and groceries. The traffic system would also be optimized to a large extent; commuters would travel more regularly within a day, and what the city authority should do is to deal with congestion around prescribed regions specific hours. Nonetheless, it would still not be that easy for residents to precisely find out what they want when the business district is extended, and planners still need time to build up the relatively perfect transport system. 

I believe that the real situation would lie somewhere in the middle. The plan seems to bring convenience to people, and there is no need to worry about the complications that are yet to emerge. However, we may still have a reflection about how things are going to be and whether the future development of technology and the transport system may or may not solve the problems that come along.

相关词汇和语法结构

Complexes 建筑群

In the long run 归根到底

Play a part 扮演角色

From the outset 从一开始

Be forced to 被迫