写作万年5.5急升7.5的经验和雷|哈尔滨学为贵雅思教育

剑14的出版给正在备战的烤鸭们指明了新的方向和要求。

就写作部分，哈尔滨学为贵结合自今年1月以来统计的*单及考生复习特点给大家说明写作备考的关键和误区。

一 写作备考误区

哈尔滨学为贵注意到很多同学听力或阅读的*轻松破6，或者可以达到7-8的高分，但写作就是徘徊于5-5.5分。

不少考生都反映写作使人怀疑人生。以下就是几处典型的写作备考失利表现：

大作文

1. 不会控制时间审题。

因为没有话题储配，对题目讨论的问题分析比较肤浅，并抓不住重点，感觉自己逻辑总是在跳跃。

很多时候都是有了些想法就开始写，但写了很长的开头又擦掉重写，完全浪费时间。

2. 不会控制文章篇幅。

考场上自己想到的点子或例子基本都不太好，也没法在短时间内深入分析题目再去论证。结果就悲剧了，文章写的很艰难，凑字数的时候只能保证尽量不跑题。

举例的时候不典型，也不会详略得当，不是想不出就是太啰嗦——有的时候是在不断重复讲道理，有的时候是在大篇幅描述例子而没有论证。

句子和段落之间的衔接只会用moreover，additionally之类的词，过渡很生硬。

3. 不会控制写作节奏。

由于以上两个大坑，整个写作考试期间基本是慌乱状态，想使劲往前赶，但发不出力。结果就是完全没时间检查，语法和词汇的准确度无法保证。

小作文

很多A类考生一直没理解小作文考点，只是单纯地用不同的表达和句型把数据罗列出来。后来才知道小作文原来是考查逻辑分析能力。

数据类图表作文就是数据类分析报告，流程地图类就是功能、原理或图形描述。

所以大部分考生一直没在意如何分析处理图表，仅仅是累计词汇表达，完全不对应考点

二 写作班学生复习经验分享

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拿到*，回首备考，大部分考生的感受是准备要趁早，不要根据自信和所谓听来的经验DIY，尤其是写作，资料和方法缺一不可。

如果说已经走过弯路或浪费过大量时间，那么好的开始时间就是现在。

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写作首先要解决的就是写什么，并做到写得准。这也是课上老师讲的原话。为此，备考一定要认识话题库！

理解每一个话题考官出题规律，弄清话题之间的联系，整理话题对应重点题目的写作思路和角度——这些都是保证作文写在点上的关

写作课每节都在强调输入大于输出，说的就是动笔写之前一定要完整、大量的多看多理解，挑重点内容记忆、模仿。

很多同学感叹考前很难培养自己的英式思维，可如果有效处理、学习了课上的题目和范文，这是绝 对能实现，这一点从审题的能力上就开始体现出来。

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逻辑结构方面，其实只要学习了第 一节课就通了，逻辑再混乱的同学也不会纠结文章段落结构了。

比如，原来议论文和说明文题型特点和逻辑结构也是通的，这个简化了之前记忆的好多套路，真的高效。

印象较深的几点内容：题目表面的陈述方式不同，但很可能是同一个写作任务；议论文一定要根据中心观点确定文章结构，而不是机械套用某个结构给自己出个大完形填空。

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语言方面，老师上课讲的第 一句话是：一篇大作文写几句话？需要几种句法考到6分和7分？7分作文字数260-270足以，需要写15-16句话，使用12钟句法。可惜的是，这是多数考生从来没有的概念。

所以，语言方面我们要量化到这一步，考试就轻松了。其实很多同学背诵的同义替换和所谓的高分词汇，考试真的没啥用，而且是经常用不出来。

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关于小作文，我们要坦然接受无规律出题的事实，尤其是A类考试，要特别注意图表分析能力的提升。否认考题的灵活度，光想着套路会出大问题。

很多同学避之不及的流程地图题，其实好好复习了会发现不难写，而且小作文的难题多数是数据类图表。

三、剑14写作考题特点

下面送上新剑14写作考题特点速递：

Task1小作文

G类4道书信作文中规中矩，无惊喜，很好，本身也很符合G类小作文一贯的出题角度和题型特点，大家踏实复习起来，一定要稳得分。备考和写作的重点仍然是信件故事情节的细化要扣题、语言要准确。

A类4道题目分别是一道数据类的动态图，一道数据类的静态图，一道流程图，还有一道地图题。

其中数据类的两道题目难度正常，与之前考题难度统一，备考关键是图表的分析处理。流程图是功能原理性流程图，也不是新题型。

地图题是图形对比类地图，几年前考查过的选址类地图题型基本可以排除。

值得注意的是书后给出的地图题满分范文字数远超150个单词，接近大作文字数要求250个单词，所以提醒目标分数是7及7+的同学要注意流程和地图题描述的细致程度。

需要特别提醒的是，A类的考生一定要注意流程题图是必复习题型，切忌抽签式备考。

剑14一半比例的题目是非数据类的流程地图题，所以就不要麻痹自己了，复习要完整！

Task2大作文

剑14中考官范文又回归了，但大作文考题灵活度却明显增加了。

无论是A类还是G类考题，大家接下来备考一定要注意两个点。

一是要更深入整理、分析话题库所有话题的考官出题角度；二是要特别注意话题之间的交集，因为多话题和话题隐晦型考题增加了。

在这里给大家分享刚刚写出的新参考范文，分别针对A类和G类抽象的题目。

剑桥14并没有提供这2道题目对应的考官范文，但同学们提问较多的恰好又是这2道题目。所以，我们学习起来。

A类Test1Task2

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Experiencing challenges and problems are part of life. There is nobody alive who has been spared hardship. When encountering a bad situation, I believe it is important to learn to accept it, such as an unpromising job or lack of money, and then try to make a difference in order to pursue a better life.

Instead of accepting the fact that bad things happen to everyone, most people struggle to distance themselves from dilemmas even though they cannot change what has happened. This resistance of reality only aggravates the pain. However, if people learned to face and embrace unhappiness or disappointment, they would realize that they are strong enough to withstand adversities. Rather than swimming against the tide, practicing going with the flow emerge a tougher and wiser person.

A troubling situation often presents people with perfect opportunities to learn a valuable life lesson. For instance, doing an unsatisfactory job or even getting laid off could motivate the person to upgrade his or her education or skills and learn to become a more valued employee so as to deliver better performance at work. Another example is that starting manage money is a sign of growing up for those who are in debt constantly. Without the ability of creating a budget or investing for the future, one’s life would be in chaos and collapse easily. Of course, there genuinely are extremely difficult and sad situations that all of us must face, such as the death of loved ones, but in most cases, things are less detrimental and dramatic than they seem and surviving difficulties provides perspective in our lives.

Overall, I believe happiness is a choice which relies on how to respond to a negative situation.

G类Test3Task2

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Happiness is very difficult to define because it means so many things to people. While some believe financial advantage is the source of happiness, I hold a quite different opinion.

A large number of people today connect happiness with economic status. They think the more money they can make, the happier they can become. When there is an item that one dreams to have or a lifestyle that he or she is eager to possess, acquiring that money does make him or her happier, but possibly only in short-term. Once the goal achieved, the person may feel unsatisfied soon. What is worse, modern life seems to be all about consumerism and people are constantly being marketed to compromise so many more valuable things and experiences only to shop more. There are people who work themselves into an early grave to make the money which does not increase life satisfaction in the end.

People tend to think certain factors contribute to happiness when they actually do not. I believe ultimate happiness is dependent on how people look at life. One’s attitude and outlook are the real factors affect happiness. To begin with, being optimistic and purposeful is crucial. Most people are determined to make the best of life, but no one is sure about whether things are going to work out or not. However, when people believe in their abilities to live life in the way they have expected, they usually have higher level of diligence and self-control which creates greater chances of success. Also, engaging in work that has meaning and purpose encourages people to stay motivated and gets them to enjoy more of the journey. Furthermore, having a strong social network in real world provides people with friends and loved ones to share with, learn from and have fun with. The bond and connection shared with others is an unrivalled component of happiness available to all. Last but not the least, wellbeing is an authentic source of being happy. People do not have to be Olympic athletes but maintaining good physical condition is essential for pursuing happiness.

To conclude, there will always be ups and downs in life but when people take care of genuine sources of happiness, they will have the best chance of maintaining a constant stream of it.

这篇文章字数比规定字数超出不少。一方面是因为本题可写性很强，论证充分字数很容易多；另一方面是由于剑14给出的一篇大作文参考范文字数比以往多很多，远超250个单词。

对比以上两道作文题，大家不难发现其实题目核心谈论的都是生活中的选择和幸福，这是属于表面抽象、话题不明显的考题，但实际难度并没有增加，体现的是考题的灵活度。

总得来说，希望接下来即将考试的同学们能尽早开启写作备考，注重自己的审题能力的提升，避免生硬的背诵、套用素材。