雅思写作里别再用for example了 有人肯定会说,举例子嘛!写“for example”不就完事了? NO!NO!NO!“举例”作为同学们最喜欢拿来拓展作文的手段之一,可能在一篇作文中会出现多次,如果大家没有有意识地升级自己的举例表达,那拿到7分的可能性真的就会降低! 今天就教给大家升级表达的招数!快来看看!
01 作插入语 ★ *简单的方法,其实就是将“ for example”进行移位 ,将其从大家惯用的句首位置移到句中。比如: Young people begin smoking for a variety of reasons. For example, they may be influenced by … 就可以改为 Young people begin smoking for a variety of reasons. They may, , be influenced by … 这样整个句子就会显得更有新意一些,如果同学们想在这个基础上运用它的变式,可以把“example”单独摘出来使用。 02 单独使用Example ★ “Example”单独使用时可以有下面这些用法: ·A/An/One example of X is(that)... ·This offers a typical example of…. ·... is an example(of)... ·... is the most obvious example. ·take ... for example. ·By way of example,... 例如: Climate is changing at an alarming rate. The melting of the polar ice caps is an obvious example of this. 这样的好处就是example可以出现在句子中的任何地方,同学们使用时就可以更加灵活 不过如果一篇文章中出现太多次“example”肯定也不行,下面来看看有哪些同义替换也可以用来举例子的! 03 同义词/近义词替换 ★ 1.For instance 这个词组和“for example”基本可以 ,举个例子: Murder, petty theft and tax evasion, , all have different motives and consequences. 2.Such as Such as一般 ,比如: Young people begin smoking for a variety of reasons, pressure from peers or curiosity. 3.Case Case也可以在多种情况下运用,比如: ·..., this case has shown that … ·..., the case reported here illustrates the … ·As a case in point, … ·There are some cases of... There have been some cases of 4.Illustrate / illustration 这个词本来在雅思小作文中很常见,作“表现”的意思, ,用法主要是: ·To illustrate,... ·One illustration is... ·To illustrate my point,... ·take... as an illustration ·... is frequently quoted/cited/taken as an illustration of ... Children often learn behaviour from the adults around them subconsciously. , children who are brought up by aggressive parents often use aggression to solve their own problems later in life. 5.Namely 这个词可能很多同学都不熟悉,其实也可以用来介绍文章中前段的论点, 。比如: Minor crimes should not have the same penalty as major crimes, murder. 6.Evidence 同学们常用的“evidence”主要是它的名词形式, ,也可以当做“for example”的同义替换进行具体的说明,给大家看个例子: However, seat belts also involve a degree of inconvenience, the unwillingness of many people to use them. 7.Proof of 先直接给同学们看例句: Art is living history, so we must preserve it. 这里的意思是“art”也是“history”的一种,相当于用比较隐藏的手法举了一个例子,同学们也可以学习一下~ 总的来说,举例的方式多种多样,可以直接把“for example”进行移位;也可以直接使用“example”及其同义替换,进行更加丰富的句式变换。同学们在使用的过程中也可以挖掘一下有没有更多的表达方式~ 文章内容源自网络 如有侵权请联系删除 ✓ 海博英语集训班 海博英语雅思托福集训班 精品小班授课 弯道超车!